Ok stole this from wanted to try this for my oc Ma'at and her future self Kellena Mito-san.

Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu Test.

Subject: Ma'at/Kinlaya Manosuki

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong.
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (fire)
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc [Ma'at can see the 'worth' of someone's heart, as in the Weighing of the Heart ceremony]
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers [Ma'at's necklace Atem gave her amplifies her natural ability]
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents [In the past Ma'at lost her mother, in the future she loses both her parents]
[ ] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. [In the past Ma'at's father hated his whole family]
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death [Ma'at nearly died under her mother in the past, in the future her parents died when their house went up in flames]
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child [Ma'at's father in the past always yelled at her and her siblings]
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship [She is Atem's wife and Queen, even though he doesn't have his memories at first]
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. [Ma'at/Kellena can summon Harpies Queen or Mystical Elf at will as they are her Ka monsters]
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul [Ma'at is and old soul in a new body]
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts [Even if 'Yami' is not in current control she can still speak with him]
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear [Ma'at makes sure to never have her necklace leave her sight]
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[x] They have a curse upon them [Ma'at has a scar upon the right side of her neck in the shape of the hieroglyph for 'n' and water. The god Set placed a curse into it to try and control her with it.]
[x] They are involved in some sort of prophecy [Ma'at does her best to help her husband remember who he is.]
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 16

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper [Ma'at doesn't like to get angry but those who talk badly of her friends and especially the Pharaoh she gets riled up. She especially doesn't like Seto Kaiba]
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[x] They are emotionless [At the start of her future life she seems quiet and reserved as she is dealing with a lot of things.]
Point Reductions: 2

Final score: 14
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue

Ma'at/Kellena is a higher end Balanced character. This is cause I didn't want to have to do the test for her separate time lives XD